![]() The characters are what makes this so engaging. GREAT FIC! Try it out here, and if u want more check it out on or Spacebattles No mistakes, and the writing isn't stunted or awkward. Relationships between characters, as well as between the pokemon and their trainer are not boring and shallow, but develop as trust is something that must be earned (which is realistic). However, what makes this fic so great is the the pokemon are not two dimensional puppets, but rather have their own individual characterisation that develops and changes. The SI is a thoughtful, three dimensional character. The importance of skill, physical strengthening and thoughtful training routines allow the SI to develop as a trainer in an entertaining way. The author explores past the statistic and 4-move pool nature of the games and has thoughtfully developed a more realistic and very interesting version of Pokemon. I love the story, and the new creative exploration of the Pokemon world. The writing style is smooth and engaging, and does not stray into the primary school level quality writing that many fanfictions/webnovels can. It is another example of a Pokemon fanfiction that brings more depth and realism to the world as the SI brings an outside perspective on Pokemon that allow him to make great leaps forward. This is a great story that is a lot further along on and Spacebattles, so feel free to read ahead there. Overall, this absolutely amazing and should hit the top of trending. Zinnia is great, though her character is only starting to show a bit of real progress as of chapter 13. Lee doesn't seem to care about not being a role model to the boy, though, so whatever. Though it's a bit weird to see Brendan, who I guess is 11, be so crass around Lee and Zinnia. Each of of Lee's Pokémon have their own personalities, and it's fun to see those personalities clash from time to time. ![]() They're amazing characters! That's right, characters. So yeah, glad to see that I won't be seeing him much! ![]() I'm not a fan of most shounen protagonists, and Ash takes the cake with the list of traits that annoy me the most. NORMAL! And everyone else acts like real people, too! Even Ash, who, thankfully, is just a side character. No, our boy Lee is slick, cool, and pretty normal. He genuinely cares for his Pokémon, but he's not some hot headed idiot who dishes out impassioned speeches every five-fucking-minute. And well, our boy Lee is just so likeable. Having a normal protagonist is important when you want to highlight the wonder and wackiness of something like the Pokémon world. He's actually a normal person! Can you believe that? An actual normal person from our Earth. I'm a sucker for isekai, but man, this really ups the bar.įor once, the main character isn't cringe-inducing. ![]() Forget fanfiction, this is a great story, period. ![]()
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